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Andreas, if you click on it, the CE suggests replacing "Where" with
"Whereas." The other comment suggests adding "listed here." I hope you're
doing well :) - Nermina


On Fri, Mar 14, 2014 at 11:52 AM, Andreas Jaeger <aj at suse.com> wrote:

> On 03/14/2014 04:27 PM, Andreas Jaeger wrote:
> > On 03/14/2014 03:49 PM, Anne Gentle wrote:
> >> Hi all,
> >> We have the copyedit back for the Operations Guide, and if you'd like to
> >> join in the fun of fixing nits, here's your chance!
> >>
> >> Who: Any docs contributor.
> >> Where: The master branch of openstack/operations-guide using our usual
> >> gerrit process.
> >> When: Due date: 3/24
> >> What: Fix the mark up annotations in the
> >> PDF: https://www.dropbox.com/s/z1esmm5kh3bbkjx/openstackOpsGuide_CE.pdf
> >> How: Put your name next to a chapter on this
> >> etherpad: https://etherpad.openstack.org/p/ops-guide-havana
> >> Do small patches, such as a file at a time, please. The ones we're
> >> fixing are marked AU for Author.
> >> Don't do anything to the links right now, such as where http is
> >> highlighted, just leave it alone. Production is working on a link
> >> shortening set up.
> >> Anything marked "Kristen" is meant for the production team.
> >>
> >> We'll merge into master, then on the 24th I'm going to make a large
> >> patch of all these to go to the feature/edits branch.
> >
> > Is there any explanation on how the blue signs are to be used. I see
> > those markers and it's not always clear what is suggested.
>
> One example: chapter scaling, page 69 (printed page numbers) starts with
> a blue "where" - what should be done here? Or at the end a blue arrow at
> "The default flavors are:"?
>
> Andreas
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Nermina Miller
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