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This draft looks really good. I left a few comments on the etherpad.

Excerpts from Jimmy McArthur's message of 2017-10-05 10:33:48 -0500:
> Sorry for the Google Docs link btw. That's where Petr and I were 
> initially collaborating. I've moved this back to the etherpad referenced 
> in ttps://etherpad.openstack.org/p/docs-i18n-ptg-queens 
> <https://etherpad.openstack.org/p/docs-i18n-ptg-queens>
> 
> https://etherpad.openstack.org/p/docs-i18n-ptg-queens-mission-statement
> 
> > Jimmy McArthur <mailto:jimmy at openstack.org>
> > October 4, 2017 at 1:18 PM
> >
> >
> >> Emilien Macchi <mailto:emilien at redhat.com>
> >> October 4, 2017 at 12:35 PM
> >>
> >> The draft is really good! It reflects very well what we said we would
> >> do at the PTG, way to go.
> >>
> >> I think the next steps would be:
> >> - Definition of Done, or how you consider something achieved (code
> >> merged, doc published, etc).
> >> - Metrics: what metrics do you use to measure what you're delivering.
> > For the DoD and Metrics our understanding of the task was that they 
> > should be built into the Evidence of Success, though I think we could 
> > still use some more specific metrics in certain spots.  Emilien, would 
> > you suggest we define these as separate line items as well?
> >
> > Thanks!
> > Jimmy
> >> - What do you expect by end of Queens (put some number in metrics is
> >> probably a good start) - it's already mentioned in your draft vision
> >> but it might be revisited once you define the 2 previous items.
> >>
> >> Good work!
> >> Jimmy McArthur <mailto:jimmy at openstack.org>
> >> October 4, 2017 at 10:46 AM
> >> I've made a bit of progress on the collaborative vision for the Docs 
> >> team: 
> >> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Xy78CnmnKlQ7SbR1XewqgrUdGe7DqnKAGYw_9aj5Ndg/edit# 
> >>
> >>
> >> This still needs plenty of work, but I wanted to put out what we have 
> >> so we can start to get some feedback from other members of the Docs 
> >> team. The Use Cases section in particular was really vast and hard to 
> >> cut down into prose without getting too detailed.
> >>
> >> Welcome your feedback and input!
> >>
> >> Thanks,
> >> Jimmy
> >>
> >>
> >>
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> > Emilien Macchi <mailto:emilien at redhat.com>
> > October 4, 2017 at 12:35 PM
> >
> > The draft is really good! It reflects very well what we said we would
> > do at the PTG, way to go.
> >
> > I think the next steps would be:
> > - Definition of Done, or how you consider something achieved (code
> > merged, doc published, etc).
> > - Metrics: what metrics do you use to measure what you're delivering.
> > - What do you expect by end of Queens (put some number in metrics is
> > probably a good start) - it's already mentioned in your draft vision
> > but it might be revisited once you define the 2 previous items.
> >
> > Good work!
> > Jimmy McArthur <mailto:jimmy at openstack.org>
> > October 4, 2017 at 10:46 AM
> > I've made a bit of progress on the collaborative vision for the Docs 
> > team: 
> > https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Xy78CnmnKlQ7SbR1XewqgrUdGe7DqnKAGYw_9aj5Ndg/edit# 
> >
> >
> > This still needs plenty of work, but I wanted to put out what we have 
> > so we can start to get some feedback from other members of the Docs 
> > team. The Use Cases section in particular was really vast and hard to 
> > cut down into prose without getting too detailed.
> >
> > Welcome your feedback and input!
> >
> > Thanks,
> > Jimmy
> >
> >
> >
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