Open Stack

On 10/21/2015 05:11 PM, Michael Xin wrote:
> Rob and Michael:
> Thanks for the update. We will probably not use any Openstack Logo.
>
> Here is the first draft of the flyer:
>
> http://5a6aa6580e900b8e8020-e5e45c5cb10329ebc9fb69948bb1b1a5.r65.cf1.rackcdn.com/ossp-flag-flyer.pdf
>
>
> Please send us your feedback.

i think my only suggestion on the text would be to slightly alter the 
second sentence of the "What's the OSSP?" section.

currently it is:

"The Security Project undertakes both technical and governance 
activities within OpenStack, aiming to provide guidance, information and 
code that enhances the overall security of the OpenStack ecosystem"

i would change the beginning to:

"The Security Project undertakes both technical and governance 
activities for the OpenStack community, aiming to provide guidance, 
information and code that enhances the overall security of the OpenStack 
ecosystem"

but i think this is a pretty minor nit.

regards,
mike