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<div>Thank you for the advice on the patch, and for the recent comments.</div>
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<span style="font-weight:bold">From: </span>Anne Gentle <<a href="mailto:anne@openstack.org">anne@openstack.org</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Date: </span>Wednesday, 2 July 2014 10:26 pm<br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">To: </span>Joseph Robinson <<a href="mailto:joseph.robinson@rackspace.com">joseph.robinson@rackspace.com</a>><br>
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<span style="font-weight:bold">Subject: </span>Re: [Openstack-docs] Introduction and Install Guide: Horizon<br>
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<div class="gmail_quote">On Tue, Jul 1, 2014 at 7:43 PM, Joseph Robinson <span dir="ltr">
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<div style="color:rgb(0,0,0);font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-size:14px">I’m sending an email out for two reasons: a patch for the Horizon section of the install guide, and an introduction. </div>
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<div style="color:rgb(0,0,0);font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-size:14px">The i<b>ntroduction</b> is short: I'm Joe, I’ve been making contributions to OpenStack Docs for a few months, but I have not introduced myself yet. So hello all, and good too meet you.</div>
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<div>Welcome! Glad to have you and thanks for the intro. Tell us more if you want. One question I ask people is "what do you see when you look over the top of your screen?"</div>
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<b>the patch</b>. I added a new section to the<b> Horizon</b> part of the install guide, and received two good comments about where the contents under the new section title belong:</div>
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<div>The <b>TL:DR:</b> the horizon content about dashboard customisation and storage sessions needs to move to the end of the Horizon install. Content also needs to be checked against the administrator guide.</div>
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<div>I checked the install guide against the admin guide and found they have replicated content. </div>
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<div>“Set up session storage for the dashboard” appears in both the <a href="http://docs.openstack.org/trunk/install-guide/install/apt/content/dashboard-sessions.html" target="_blank">
install</a> and <a href="http://docs.openstack.org/admin-guide-cloud/content/dashboard-sessions.html" target="_blank">
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<div>My plan is to: </div>
<div>*Remove the duplicated content from the install guide. </div>
<div>*Move any information on customisation and storage sessions from the start, to the end of the Horizon install guide, with links to the admin guide. </div>
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<div>As you dig in there, you'll find it's just an xi:include of the dashboard_sessions section. So it's fine to link it but you'll see they are identical.</div>
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<div>I agree with the reviewers that storage sessions info is provided for admins. </div>
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<div>*Build up the introductory paragraphs for Horizon with correct information about the dashboard service so it matches the rest of the install guide.</div>
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<div>Sorry for the long post. Is the plan for this patch ok?</div>
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