<div dir="ltr"><br><div class="gmail_extra"><br><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Tue, Jul 1, 2014 at 7:43 PM, Joseph Robinson <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:joseph.robinson@rackspace.com" target="_blank">joseph.robinson@rackspace.com</a>></span> wrote:<br>
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Hello to the Docs Team,</div>
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I’m sending an email out for two reasons: a patch for the Horizon section of the install guide, and an introduction. </div>
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The i<b>ntroduction</b> is short: I'm Joe, I’ve been making contributions to OpenStack Docs for a few months, but I have not introduced myself yet. So hello all, and good too meet you.</div></div></blockquote><div><br>
</div><div>Welcome! Glad to have you and thanks for the intro. Tell us more if you want. One question I ask people is "what do you see when you look over the top of your screen?"</div><div> </div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
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Now onto <b>the patch</b>. I added a new section to the<b> Horizon</b> part of the install guide, and received two good comments about where the contents under the new section title belong:</div>
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<a href="https://review.openstack.org/#/c/103474/" target="_blank">https://review.openstack.org/#/c/103474/</a></div>
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<div>The <b>TL:DR:</b> the horizon content about dashboard customisation and storage sessions needs to move to the end of the Horizon install. Content also needs to be checked against the administrator guide.</div>
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<div>I checked the install guide against the admin guide and found they have replicated content. </div>
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<div>“Set up session storage for the dashboard” appears in both the <a href="http://docs.openstack.org/trunk/install-guide/install/apt/content/dashboard-sessions.html" target="_blank">
install</a> and <a href="http://docs.openstack.org/admin-guide-cloud/content/dashboard-sessions.html" target="_blank">
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<div>My plan is to: </div>
<div>*Remove the duplicated content from the install guide. </div>
<div>*Move any information on customisation and storage sessions from the start, to the end of the Horizon install guide, with links to the admin guide. </div></div></blockquote><div><br></div><div>As you dig in there, you'll find it's just an xi:include of the dashboard_sessions section. So it's fine to link it but you'll see they are identical.</div>
<div><br></div><div>I agree with the reviewers that storage sessions info is provided for admins. </div><div> </div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div style="word-wrap:break-word">
<div>*Build up the introductory paragraphs for Horizon with correct information about the dashboard service so it matches the rest of the install guide.</div>
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<div>Sorry for the long post. Is the plan for this patch ok?</div>
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