<div dir="ltr">Thank you, Anne, for your response. If no one objects, I'll file a bug for this one. I'll keep this thread going for other chapters. - Nermina</div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><br><div class="gmail_quote">
On Tue, Dec 10, 2013 at 9:57 AM, Anne Gentle <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:annegentle@justwriteclick.com" target="_blank">annegentle@justwriteclick.com</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
<div dir="ltr">Hi Nermina, <div><br></div><div>All of this looks correct to me. I did have to look for other PKI bugs, and the only one I found is about setting up PKI for clients, <a href="https://bugs.launchpad.net/openstack-manuals/+bug/1163938" target="_blank">https://bugs.launchpad.net/openstack-manuals/+bug/1163938</a>. I think the Cloud Administrator Guide is more for those people supporting users. So making the PKI intro common should work just fine. </div>
<div><br></div><div>Thanks for doing this analysis -</div><div>Anne</div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div><div class="h5">On Sun, Dec 8, 2013 at 1:02 AM, Nermina Miller <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:nerminamiller@gmail.com" target="_blank">nerminamiller@gmail.com</a>></span> wrote:<br>
</div></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div><div class="h5"><div dir="ltr">Hi all,<div><br></div><div>Right now I'm working with Sean and Pranav on bringing some Swift information over from the Training Guide to the Cloud Admin Guide, but I've also begun reviewing the Configuration Reference structure. I think it'd be agile to work chapter by chapter, so here is the structure of the Identity Service chapter with my notes for appropriation of each section:</div>
<div><br></div><div><div style="font-size:12px;font-family:Verdana,Geneva,sans-serif"><h2 style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Arial,Helvetica,geneva">Chapter 1. Identity Service</h2></div>
<div style="font-size:12px;font-family:Verdana,Geneva,sans-serif"><p style="font-weight:bold;font-size:10pt"><strong>Contents</strong></p><dl><dt><span><a href="http://docs.openstack.org/havana/config-reference/content/ch_configuring-openstack-identity.html#keystone-configuration-file" target="_blank">Identity Service configuration files</a></span></dt>
<dt><br></dt><dt>Leave <span style="font-weight:bold;text-align:-webkit-center">Table 1.1. keystone.conf file sections</span> </dt><dt>Move all of the other info to Cloud Admin's Identity Service chapter </dt><dt><br>
</dt><dt><span><a href="http://docs.openstack.org/havana/config-reference/content/ch_configuring-openstack-identity.html#certificates-for-pki" target="_blank">Certificates for PKI</a></span></dt><dt><br></dt><dt>PKI intro info is in the Security Guide. I recommend putting the intro in the Common and reusing for all guides where it is needed.</dt>
<dt>Move all of the instructions to Cloud Admin Guide. Change Cloud Admin's chapter head from Identity Management to Identity to match the other chapter names (i.e., Compute, and so on).</dt><dt><br></dt><dt><span><a href="http://docs.openstack.org/havana/config-reference/content/ch_configuring-openstack-identity.html#keystone-ssl-config" target="_blank">Configure the Identity Service with SSL</a></span></dt>
<dt><br></dt><dt>Move to Cloud Admin Guide.</dt><dt><br></dt><dt><span><a href="http://docs.openstack.org/havana/config-reference/content/ch_configuring-openstack-identity.html#keystone-external-auth" target="_blank">External authentication with the Identity Service</a></span></dt>
<dt><br></dt><dt>Move to Cloud Admin Guide.</dt><dt><br></dt><dt><span><a href="http://docs.openstack.org/havana/config-reference/content/ch_configuring-openstack-identity.html#configuring-keystone-for-ldap-backend" target="_blank">Configure the Identity Service with an LDAP back-end</a></span></dt>
<dt><br></dt><dt>Move to Cloud Admin Guide.</dt><dt><br></dt><dt><span><a href="http://docs.openstack.org/havana/config-reference/content/ch_configuring-openstack-identity.html#sample-configuration-files" target="_blank">Identity Service sample configuration files</a></span></dt>
<dt><br></dt><dt>Move to Cloud Admin Guide.</dt><div><br></div><div>If you all are OK with this, I could go ahead and file a bug that modifies the intro and makes these changes.</div></dl></div><div><br></div><div>Thanks!</div>
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</blockquote></div><br><br clear="all"><div><br></div>-- <br><div dir="ltr">Thank you!<div><br></div><div>Nermina Miller</div><div>Tech Writer and Editor</div></div>
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