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<div>A few suggestions – take them or leave them!</div>
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<div>First sentence – lead with the documentation part. The word "adoption" is unnecessary (I think). </div>
<div>Second sentence – what's the difference between "develop" and "create"? X the word create.</div>
<div>I think the "treated like OpenStack code" part needs its own sentence because I don't understand what it means in the context of the second sentence.</div>
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<div>Provide documentation for core OpenStack projects to promote OpenStack.</div>
<div>Develop and maintain tools and processes to ensure quality, accurate documentation.</div>
<div>Treat documentation like OpenStack code.</div>
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<span style="font-weight:bold">From: </span>Anne Gentle <<a href="mailto:annegentle@justwriteclick.com">annegentle@justwriteclick.com</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Date: </span>Monday, July 22, 2013 3:20 PM<br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">To: </span>Nicholas Chase <<a href="mailto:nchase@mirantis.com">nchase@mirantis.com</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Cc: </span>"<a href="mailto:openstack-docs@lists.openstack.org">openstack-docs@lists.openstack.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:openstack-docs@lists.openstack.org">openstack-docs@lists.openstack.org</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Subject: </span>Re: [Openstack-docs] Review: Program description for OpenStack Documentation<br>
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<div dir="ltr">You know, I'm thinking it's overly complex and "listy" anyway. I think this is simpler, and I meant to indicate core:
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<div>Promote OpenStack adoption by providing documentation for core projects. Develop, maintain, and create tools and processes to ensure quality, accurate documentation treated like OpenStack code.<br>
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<div style="">Thoughts on simplifying?</div>
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<div class="gmail_quote">On Mon, Jul 22, 2013 at 1:51 PM, Nicholas Chase <span dir="ltr">
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On 7/22/2013 1:09 PM, Anne Gentle wrote:<br>
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Mission Statement:<br>
Promote OpenStack adoption by providing documentation for installing,<br>
configuring, administrating, and using OpenStack clouds. Develop,<br>
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OK, this is nitpicky, but is it "administrating" or "administering"? I mean, I know we SAY administrating, but I've always considered it a "fun" word, like "automagically".<br>
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